Tip toe, tip toe, tip toe. Boo! Out of the shadows jumped two ghosts and a hairy monster! They chased after me. They were as big as a house. It was the most terrifying thing in your life. I wished I’d never gone into the haunted castle, but it was too late now. I was in trouble. Suddenly three monsters appeared in the other direction. I was doomed.
by William
that was awesome william by tyra
ReplyDeletei liked you story by tyra
ReplyDeleteis that a night mare one because i had a night mare about me and lot of monters. by tyra
ReplyDeleteI like the way you build up the supsense and leave the story almost unfinished as it makes me use my imagination about what might happen next. Well done William. Mr Gilmore.
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